Rabu, 29 Oktober 2014



My Sister  

                   
          My sister is quite young .she is average height and she is quite thin but muscular. She has straight and long hair. her body is slim and  will built. She has slant eyes and she has sharp nose. She has red lips. she has motherish face .she has discipline and able human characteristic .she has fair skin. She doesn’t tan easily and has to be careful in the sun. my sister corrected her crooked teeth by wearing a brace. She has rosy cheeks and small ears. she is kind because she always help many friends and than  my sister is a creative person.  her hobby is reading novel and short story.  Sometimes  she gives suggestion, advise, spirit for me .Every morning my sister helps her mom for have breakfast .she is my good sister for me because she is an adult person
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5 komentar:

  1. She straight and long hair.= She has long and straight hair
    She has rosy cheeks, small ears. = She has rosy cheeks and small ears.
    ;)

    BalasHapus
  2. ohh thanks for your correct ayu. maybe I am less careful

    BalasHapus
  3. * she is my good sister for me because she is adult.
    i think better if like this : .she is my good sister because she is an adult person. or .she is a good sister for me because she is an adult person.
    * Sometimes she gives suggestion, advise, spirit for me -> Sometimes she gives suggestion, advise and spirit for me.

    BalasHapus
  4. Every morning my sister help her mom for have breakfast = Every morning my sister help her mom to prepare have breakfast

    BalasHapus
  5. Every morning my sister help her mom for have breakfast.
    you less s ...helps.. you use simple present right?

    BalasHapus