My Sister
My
sister is quite young .she is average height and she is quite thin but
muscular. She has straight and long hair.
her body is slim and will built. She has
slant eyes and she has sharp nose. She has red lips. she has motherish face .she
has discipline and able human characteristic .she has fair skin. She doesn’t
tan easily and has to be careful in the sun. my sister corrected her crooked
teeth by wearing a brace. She has rosy cheeks and small ears. she is kind because
she always help many friends and than my
sister is a creative person. her hobby
is reading novel and short story. Sometimes she gives suggestion, advise, spirit for me .Every
morning my sister helps her mom for have breakfast .she is my good sister for me because she is an adult person
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She straight and long hair.= She has long and straight hair
BalasHapusShe has rosy cheeks, small ears. = She has rosy cheeks and small ears.
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ohh thanks for your correct ayu. maybe I am less careful
BalasHapus* she is my good sister for me because she is adult.
BalasHapusi think better if like this : .she is my good sister because she is an adult person. or .she is a good sister for me because she is an adult person.
* Sometimes she gives suggestion, advise, spirit for me -> Sometimes she gives suggestion, advise and spirit for me.
Every morning my sister help her mom for have breakfast = Every morning my sister help her mom to prepare have breakfast
BalasHapusEvery morning my sister help her mom for have breakfast.
BalasHapusyou less s ...helps.. you use simple present right?