My house
My beautiful house is
medium size. the color of house is brown. the room is fully furnished. There are
3 bedrooms, 1 bathroom, living room, middle room and a kitchen. The first bedroom
is for me ,second room is for my parents and the last bedroom for guest that
will come to my house. my bedroom is airy and large windows over looking view. There are a single bed, cupboard, AC.
In the middle of the room , my
family gather watching television. In the kitchen there are a kitchen tools, food table, a gas stove. I think my house is cool
because near the field and in front of my house is
flowers.so, comfortable house.
There are a single bed, = There is a single bed
BalasHapusin the middle room my family get together and watching television= In the middle of the room , my family gather .... ( use comma)
second room is for my parent -> second room is for my parents
BalasHapusa gas cooker..I think you wanna write gas stove...
BalasHapusthe color = The color
BalasHapusthanks for your comment vena but I think the writing the color or THe color same.maybe up to me :-D
BalasHapus